Can't believe I lived through that... looked good at the beginning but I would say you ruined it at the end... I doubt people will even watch till the end (unless that's what you were trying to do! XD)
This could have been better with a little more work... Though I do like how you have used music and your using your characters to communicate through their actions!
Really good! I especially like the attatude of the narrator!
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